This was a feature I subbed for Metro’s In Focus section that examined the state of children’s TV in the digital age.
The copy needed to be cut back while retaining colour and all the main points. As with all these pieces, this was not a case of just chopping paragraphs but a line-by-line revision to fit the space without losing the detail.
I include it here for the shameless use of Tiswas, a legendary British children’s show, in the headline.
You can read the original story in PDF form here.